Harry and Hermione

For 's HP FANART contest: check it out [link]

Will probably edit as I think it looks too blotchy. Pleased with the likenesses but I'm still trying to explore my own style and think this looks a bit flat and lifeless. Also I had to take a picture under artificial light and it might look better under daylight.

Feel free to tell me what I've done wrong!

Pencil on Bristol (2B, 4B, 7B and 8B)

Daniel Radcliffe and Emma Watson as Harry Potter and Hermione Granger in a still from the upcoming movie: Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince.

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EDIT: tried to tidy up the shading on the faces and make the eyes a bit darker. Gave Hermione some freckles and gave her hair a bit more contrast. The arm of Harry's glasses is now more defined but his hair is still giving me grief.

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EDIT TAKE 2: Sorry to keep updating this! Finally got a good scan, shame I only had access to a scanner weeks after the contest was closed as it might have given me a better chance: looks so much better than the the last version. As it was, I never even made the shortlist. Boo.